Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Friday, April 17, 2020
bear grylls and the dangerous saw scaled viper
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good job ryder and me because i helped to
ReplyDeleteHi Ryder! This is a really cool recount of a Bear Grylls story! It was exciting to read. I wish I had Bear's skills! Well done for persevering when the words got hard. Next time read back over what you have written out loud, you may find where you can put in more punctuation like commas and full stops.
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