Hi Bloggers my name is Eyder and at school today we did a quick write on anything we wanted so I did my one on a Canadian army squad in Afghanistan this is still a WIP
I really enjoyed it because I got to write about what I love
I got my images of the Canadian army
I wrote it on docs
Have you ever written about the Afghanistan war
Bye
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Hello Ryder
ReplyDeleteThis is a really good piece of writing because you put speech marks Make sure you watch out for Grammer Errors
Isaac
Hi ryder Do you want to be a soldier when you grow up cos I think I would be pretty cool
ReplyDeleteWhat army would you work for would you be in the navy or would you be in the marines