Hi bloggers! how have you been doing so In literacy We have been doing this 10-minute warm-up
and This is 1 I have done
I really enjoyed writing this because I loved cool stories like this
Do you like to write stories like this?
Friday, April 16, 2021
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Hi Ryder, this is a really good post, maybe nextime you could make it bigger and tell us a bit about the story so it gets people hooked to the story, I like how you named the guns that you had and told about the details. It was hard to catch my breath when reading it so you could use more commas and full stops. This is a great Blog though, at the end you could have put, 'Pocket a pocketknife and my canteen, people started to shoot me' or something like that? instead of 'they' you could put he 'Bob' or something,Thanks for posting, Tilly :D
ReplyDeleteWhy did you not have a gun strap,also when was this set in you know vietnam 1996 something like that. Cya
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