Hi bloggers this is still a work in progress
so I thought this was easy because I like doing this type of stuff
I did this In my spear time
what do you like to write about
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Hi bloggers this is still a work in progress
so I thought this was easy because I like doing this type of stuff
I did this In my spear time
what do you like to write about
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Hi Ryder
ReplyDeletethis is very interesting about world war 2 did you know my great grandad fought in world war 1 Battle of the Somme and was a tank driving instructor in World war 2. I like that you added a picture with all of the ranks and epaulettes.
Maybe you could add a bit more deatil in your blurb for others
Isaac
Isaac
Hi Ryder. Its Sree from Toroa. The idea is really interesting because it is telling me about a very big thing from history. This reminded me of My Granddad who was in World War 2. Next time when you are saying the name of a place you could use capitals.
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